Please look this over. - Page 2

alessia55 · 03-19-12, 08:23 PM

A few more things I spotted:

One of the biggest misconceptions i̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ about Savannah Monitors is that they are desert dwelling animals; this is false information. Virtually all of the Savannah Monitors captured for the worldwide pet trade are "harvested" from Ghana Africa, a Coastal grassland plains that has rich vegetation and relatively high humidity. When we fail to provide the required humidity in captivity, these majestic animals perish from various states of dehydration. What most keepers fail to realize a̶s̶ ̶w̶e̶l̶l̶,̶ is that these animals spend much of their time d̶o̶w̶n̶ inside burrows (or tunnels) underground to avoid exposure and predators.

infernalis · 03-19-12, 08:46 PM

corrected..

Gungirl · 03-19-12, 08:48 PM

Alessia do you have a program to proof read things for you or are you the program?

Looks good Wayne.

alessia55 · 03-19-12, 08:48 PM

LMAO the program is called procrastination

alessia55 · 03-19-12, 08:50 PM

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Originally Posted by infernalis

corrected..

Maybe it isn't loading well on my side... still see the same errors on the page I'm viewing. Also it looks like you centered all the text..which makes it look messy.

**millertime89** · 03-19-12, 08:52 PM

I think it looks good centered, I also think Alessia caught all the errors I found.

infernalis · 03-19-12, 09:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by alessia55

Maybe it isn't loading well on my side... still see the same errors on the page I'm viewing. Also it looks like you centered all the text..which makes it look messy.

It's possible your machine saves past views.

for the centering issue, I moved sentances around, and added some text.

I also included a list of proper prey items, the rodent argument was there, but no suggested foods. That's fixed.

I am burned out on it for tonight, whatever else anyone finds, I will correct tomorrow.