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Old 03-12-03, 08:13 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is a toon that I have done for Kawartha Turtle Trauma Centre, and I was wondering if I could get some feed back!

Thanks in advance guys!
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Old 03-12-03, 08:14 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Its a good drwing, but i dont get the joke;sorry
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Old 03-12-03, 08:16 PM   #3 (permalink)
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His shell is broken!!!

Good cartoon Dino, but you might want to make the cracked shell show a little more.

Great work!
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Oh i see it now,
lol, my bad, guess i didnt look hard enough
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Old 03-12-03, 08:18 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Good cartoon Dino, but you might want to make the cracked shell show a little more.
Yup
Great work though!
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Looks good to me. maybe put his leg in a cast or show more of the shell with bandages on it...
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The crack is something I added after, just cause..

If it is associated with the Trauma Centre do you thing it would make more sense?....know what I mean? Posted at there site or in print!

Thanks for the constructive criticism everyone! and your quick replys

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P.S. Good Idea Lisa, maybe a couple of bandaids!
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it's great and it works

awesome toon Dino

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Old 03-12-03, 08:34 PM   #9 (permalink)
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It's great Dino. Congratulations. But you must make more of the "broken" shell. Or put little arrows lol.
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Old 03-12-03, 08:46 PM   #10 (permalink)
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dino, great cartoon!
i dont think you need to add anything...i think its better if you dont add more cracks...just gonna over do it.
nice work!
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Old 03-12-03, 09:07 PM   #11 (permalink)
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Old 03-13-03, 01:29 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Thank you very much Dino, it looks great. It will work really well in the Kawartha Turtle Trauma Centre Newsletter. Its exactly what I was looking for. Keep up the great work.
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Old 03-13-03, 01:36 AM   #13 (permalink)
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I like the leg cast idea. But it looks great Dino! I love your drawings!!
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Looks great man. keep it like it is. I think it's awesome. I do like the leg cast idea too but hey it's still awesome either way.
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Old 03-13-03, 07:07 AM   #15 (permalink)
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I'd make a more noticeable crack in the plastron. Depending on the size it is reproduced at, the existing cracks will not be very noticeable.

Great work, though!

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